Letter Writing, Formal Letters, Solved Examples


LETTER WRITING

It is a very common form of communication which in today’s fast-paced world is becoming obsolete. It is different from other forms of compositions because it is intended to a specific reader. Writing an effective letter is an art which makes the experience and feelings come alive and can be mastered by practice.
Dos & Don’ts of Letter Writing
i)                    Don’t beat around the bush.
ii)                  State the purpose of writing in the first paragraph.
iii)                In formal letters, mention date, reference number if required.
iv)                Only relevant information
v)                  Use courteous language. Avoid passive voice.
vi)                Avoid vagueness of expression.
There are two types of letters—
i)                    Formal Letter- It includes letters to editors, business letters, complaint letters, enquiry letters, job application etc.
ii)                  Informal Letter–It includes letters to friends, relatives and family members.

·        Allocation of marks

a.       Lay Out                            1 Mark
b.      Content                            21/2 Marks
c.       Expression                       21/2 Marks


FORMAL LETTERS
FORMAT
·         Sender’s Address
·         Date
·         Receiver’s Address
·         Subject
·         Salutation
·         Body
·         Subscription/ Leave taking expression
Dos & Don’ts
·         Use left alignment.
·         In salutation the first letter of the second word should also be capital e.g. Dear Uncle.
·         Body should be at least in three paragraphs.
·        While concluding the letter don't use apostrophe mark in Your's  Yours.While concluding the letter don’t use apostrophe mark in Your’s Yours.
·        Don't include irrelevant points.

1.      Suppose yourself to be an educationist, Arun Kumar. You feel that present education system is not good enough and there are serious flaws in it. You feel that the present education system neglects individual talents and emphasizes on rote learning. Write a letter to the editor making a case for all round development of the students moulding them into good citizens rather than unskilled bookworms.

            24-A, H. B. Colony
            Alwar, Rajasthan
            1st March, 2016

            The Editor
            The Times of India
            New Delhi

            Subject: Present education system.
            Sir
            Through the columns of your reputed national daily, I would like to express my concern about the impractical and unproductive present education system which is eating up our children.

            In the present world of increasing competition, the schools design their curriculum not keeping in view the children’s development rather to outdo the other schools thus making them beast of burden instead of developing their personality.

            The schools pay no attention to hone the skills of the children helping them grow up as responsible citizen rather they focus on somehow completing the syllabus. To them, it matters less what the students have learnt, the important thing to them is whether the pages of their notebooks are filled or not.      
   
          Rote learning and excellence in examination have become supreme in today’s education. Co-curricular activities are put aside. Only those students are considered good who secure good marks in exams and those who lag behind in studies they are looked down upon not only by the teachers but also by their parents.

            The schools should inculcate age-old values of brotherhood, tolerance, team spirit, satisfaction etc. in the students. The education imparted should be practical and relevant. The interest of the students should be taken into consideration. Only then our education can be called true education.

            I hope, you will be kind enough to provide some space to my views in your widely circulated newspaper. Only the awareness of public can bring about a revamping of present education system.
            Thanking you,

            Yours sincerely
            Arun Kumar


2.         You are Megha/ Mukesh of Class XII of St. Joseph Sr. Sec. School, Hindon city. Write a letter to the Manager of Pustak Mahal, Chaura Rasta, Jaipur inquiring about the availability of a few books you need for your library. Write as the secretary of your school library.

            St. Joseph School
            Hindon City, Rajasthan
            1st March, 2016

            The Manager
Pustak Mahal, Chaura Rasta
Jaipur

Subject: Books for library.

Sir

With reference to the subject cited above, I would like to state that I am the Secretary of St. Joseph Sr. Sec. School’s library. We are in need of some books for our library. The details are as follows –

Book                                       Class                           No. of Copies
NTSE                                      X                                             5
NSTSE                                    X                                             5
KVPY                                     XI                                            5
English Grammar                    IX- XII                                   5
Chemistry Olympiad               XII                                          5

Please send us the details of price and the availability of these books with the discount that you can offer. We would also like to know how long you will take to supply these items. The details received after 15th March will not be entertained.

So please let us know all the details as soon as possible.
Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
Mukesh Meghwani
Secretary, School Library

3.         You are Sonakshi, student of class xii, living at Basant Vihar, Kota. You want to enter National Film Academy, Nagpur after you pass class xii. Write a letter to the director of the film academy seeking information about admission procedure, eligibility criteria, fee structure, placement record etc.

Basant Vihar
Kota
1st March, 2016

The Director
National Film Academy
Nagpur

Subject: Inquiry about U.G. course.
Sir

            With reference to the subject cited above I would like to state that I am a student of classXII and wish to make my career in acting but I have no idea how to pursue my goal.

I came to know about you through an advertisement published in the Times of India that you offer different courses in acting, film-making etc. Since I wish to have no confusions in the end and to reach a firm decision, I would like to collect all relevant information beforehand.
Please tell me what is the right time to apply for your course? Can I apply online? Is there any scholarship for good or financially poor students? Is there any entrance test for admission? I hope you accept fee in installments as well.

I would also like to know about the total fee, duration of the course, examination centres and if there is any placement assistance after the successful completion of the course.
Looking forward to an early reply from your side.
Thanking you

Yours sincerely
Sonakshi

4.         Saurabh is a resident of Thiruvannamali, Chennai which got submerged due to heavy rain. After reading the following write-up in the newspaper regarding the havoc caused by the flood in Chennai, he decides to write a letter to the editor of a national daily complaining about the slow pace of relief and rescue operations.

Chennai Submerged
            Chennai, 2nd December, 2015: Chennai is receiving incessant rains since 1 December which is termed as the heaviest in the last 100 years. The heavy rain has crippled the life as numerous roads, train tracks and airport runways have been flooded. Most of the areas are in danger zone. Rescue operations have been started but people are complaining about slow and inadequate relief operations…
            Thiruvannamalai
            Chennai
            10 December, 2015

            The Editor
            The Hindu
            Chennai

            Subject: Inadequate flood relief in Chennai villages.

            Sir

            Through the columns of your widely circulated national daily, I would like to highlight the slow pace of relief operations carried out by the state government with regard to the flooded villages in and around Chennai.
            Chennai has received incessant rains since the 1st December which is also the heaviest in the last 100 years. It has crippled the normal life in Chennai as the roads, railway tracks and the airport are all submerged. People are stuck at different places without food and help. Schools and colleges have been closed and exams have been postponed. The meteorological department has predicted heavy rains for next four days as well.

            The government agencies say that the government has started her operations at war level but public resources say that the rescue operations are not going at proper pace. The people deployed for this task are insufficient and careless in their approach. Several people are still stranded and haven’t got any food packets. The accommodation provided in the relief camps is not enough.

            People suggest that the government should deploy more soldiers for this task so that help can be quickened and more people can be rescued.

            I hope, you will be kind enough to provide some space to my views in your newspaper this may perhaps swing the authorities into action.
            Thanking you,

            Yours sincerely
            Saurabh

5.         You are Manish/ Manisha, living at 22, Azad Nagar, Lucknow. You bought a mobile phone from Amber Mobile World, Azad Chowk, Lucknow. The phone developed a problem within a few days of the purchase.Write a letter to the Sales Manager of the showroom, complaining about the defect and seeking immediate replacement.

            22, Azad Nagar
            Lucknow
            1st March,2016

            The Sales Manager
            Amber Mobile World
            Azad Chowk, Lucknow

            Subject :   Defective mobile phone.

            Sir

            With reference to the subject cited above I would like to say that I purchased a mobile phone from your showroom on 15th February, 2016. But within a few days of the purchase it started malfunctioning.

            I reported the matter at once but it was said that it might be because of unknowingly disturbing the setting and they temporarily solved the problem. But afterwards there emerged lots of other problems: It would automatically shut down; Contacts would not respond and the phone would hang; Applications would take a very long time to open etc. You have even serviced it once but the problems still persist.

            As under the terms and conditions of sale, the phone carries a guarantee of two years, so I request you to replace my phone with a new one so that I can avoid further inconvenience.
            The model is Samsung Duos and the receipt no. is SA/ 1002.
            Thanking you,

            Yours sincerely
            Manish

6.         You are Prakash/ Preeti of 22, Preet Vihar, Udaipur. Write a letter to the editor of the Indian Express about rash driving and suggest preventive measures.

            22, Preet Vihar
            Udaipur
            1st March, 2016

            The Editor
            The Indian Express
            Jaipur

            Subject: Rash driving in the city.

Sir

Through the columns of your esteemed national daily I would like to voice my concern about rash driving in the city.     
     
Now adays the cases of rash driving are increasing. Especially, the youngsters and new bike enthusiasts have been seen driving rashly. To flaunt their bikes or cars or the youngsters tend to do this. Their immaturity doesn’t make them realize how they are risking and many others’ lives. The children are impulsive, fearless and love thrill. They are unable to see the consequences. Even the girls are not behind boys in this matter. Every year, we hear and read about several casualties due to rash driving and in most of such cases we find teenagers involved. Though there are laws and rules yet the culprits always go scot free.

The government should include traffic rules into curriculum and make sure that the culprit should never escape without punishment. Installing CCTVs and creating check-points can also help in this.

I hope your newspaper will prove to be instrumental in disseminating awareness about rash driving and carrying my concern to the authorities.
Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
Preeti

7.        Suppose yourself to be Srikant/ Sreeja of A-45 Tilak Nagar, Tonk road, Jaipur. You saw an advertisement in the Times of India for the post of a PGT Maths in Sanskar Public School, Alwar. Draft a letter for the same.
           A-45, Tilak Nagar
           Jaipur
           1st March, 2016
          
The Principal
           Sanskar Public School
           Alwar

           Subject: Application for the post of PGT Maths.

           Sir

           With reference to the subject cited above I would like to state that I came to know through your advertisement published in the Times of India that you have a vacancy for the post of PGT Maths in your esteemed Institute.

Since I meet the required eligibility criteria, I would like to offer my candidature for the same.
I hope, you will definitely provide me with a chance to be interviewed so that I can prove my worth for your institute.    
Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
Sreeja
Enclosure: Curriculum Vitae

Curriculum Vitae
Personal Information
Name                                       -           Sreeja
DOB                                       -           09 February 1993
Marital Status                          -           Single
Languages Known                  -           Hindi, English, Malayalam
Father’s Name                         -           Sreedharan Nair
Nationality                              -           Indian
Address for Correspondence  -           A- 45, Tilak Nagar, Tonk road, Jaipur

Educational Abstract
Exam
Board/ University
Year
Remarks
X
CBSE
2007
90%
XII
CBSE
2009
95%
B.Sc.
UOK
2012
95%
M.Sc.
UOK
2014
80%
B.Ed.
UOK
2015
80%

Interests
Reading, writing and painting
Reference
Name                           -           Prakash Purohit          
Address                       -           2-B-2, Virat Nagar, Jaipur
Mobile                         -           9352******
                                                                                                           
Date    1st March 20XX          Sreeja
Place     Jaipur                                                                               Signature

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